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[凌辱虐情] 【女畜道之变态人渣英杰传】第一章

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文学素养确实高，但是文笔拖沓，半文半白的文风确实让我看的兴致全无，感觉就像是为了凑字数而强行写的，对比金庸等人写的武侠小说，确实差距太大，希望楼主能发挥自己的文笔力，在情节结构上做改进
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